Tuesday, 26 February 2013

Before Sunrise Character

His lonely sad eyes are lit up by the shimmering moon as he searches the dark shadows.  Cotton wool clouds silently dance in the sky behind his almond shaped head, lighting up his top tuft like an antennae.  He doesn't know what he's searching for but, a strong pull forces his feet to move and creases a wrinkle in his brow.

Allana

1 comment:

  1. Allana
    We like your magical words cotton wool clouds. Your story was awsome because it has lots of good words init.
    From Bella, Est'ee and Harrit.

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