This is the writing blog of Team Endeavour - a group of 8 - 10 year olds at Springston School.
The posts might not be perfect when they first go on the blog but with your comments and as we improve our editing - there should be a huge improvement.
His eyes were drooping down as he walked really smooth and slow. He didn't think he should be there.
His long skinny body moved silently through the dark village. It is a mystery where he is supposed to be.
By Bella 8 Years old
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