Tuesday, 26 February 2013

Before Sunrise Character

His eyes light up white bright by the moon.
He has a twirl at the top of his head.
The strange creature is skinny and
moves slowly.
He has black lips and they don't
say much.

By Estee


  1. Dear Estee,
    I love your description about the alien. It makes me feel like I don't need the picture.
    Jess age8.

  2. Yes Estee - I can really think about the character when you say his lips don't have much to say. I wonder why he does not talk much. Will you be explaining this as part of the story?

  3. He does not talk because he is an alien. But he shows his feelings by being sad on his face.
    From Estee


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