Sad lonely eyes are lit up by the clear shining moon. He has a slim skinny neck like a pencil and body like a stick.
On top of his head there is a black tuft that points to the sky. Alone, walking through the town, his eyes are stunned at what he sees. They are pale white and beaming.
Where is he going? What is he searching for?
This is the writing blog of Team Endeavour - a group of 8 - 10 year olds at Springston School. The posts might not be perfect when they first go on the blog but with your comments and as we improve our editing - there should be a huge improvement.
Monday 4 March 2013
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I like how you describe what this creature must be feeling - the fact that he is sad and lonely really affects me.
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