Thursday, 7 March 2013

Story start

A dark clock face is standing tall silently as a ghost.
Gingerbread houses gloom out of the distant shadows.
The balconies are small and the doors are oval shape.
The statue warrior sits on the fountain in the centre of the courtyard.
Trumpet statues make water come out magically.

1 comment:

  1. I enjoyed reading this piece of writing - I enjoyed the line 'the gingerbread houses gloom' htat really got me thinking about the picture and set a strong image in my head. The final line also was great I enjoyed thinking about water coming out magically.
    Mr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.


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