This is the writing blog of Team Endeavour - a group of 8 - 10 year olds at Springston School.
The posts might not be perfect when they first go on the blog but with your comments and as we improve our editing - there should be a huge improvement.
A dark clock face is standing tall silently as a ghost.
Gingerbread houses gloom out of the distant shadows.
The balconies are small and the doors are oval shape.
The statue warrior sits on the fountain in the centre of the courtyard.
I enjoyed reading this piece of writing - I enjoyed the line 'the gingerbread houses gloom' htat really got me thinking about the picture and set a strong image in my head. The final line also was great I enjoyed thinking about water coming out magically. Mr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato. Melvilleroom8.blogspot.com
I enjoyed reading this piece of writing - I enjoyed the line 'the gingerbread houses gloom' htat really got me thinking about the picture and set a strong image in my head. The final line also was great I enjoyed thinking about water coming out magically.
ReplyDeleteMr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato. Melvilleroom8.blogspot.com