Sunday, 24 March 2013

Writing Sample - Lune et L'Autre

We used the start of this really cool short movie to base our writing sample on for Term 1.  Have look at the movie then read our favourite sentences.  We will write them in comments below.


1 comment:

  1. Hey team.... You used all the things we have learned this term in your writing sample. I saw heaps of adjectives and mountains of similes. I would love to see you use 'Writer's Eyes' to edit your very short stories then get some examples on this writing blog.

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