This is the writing blog of Team Endeavour - a group of 8 - 10 year olds at Springston School.
The posts might not be perfect when they first go on the blog but with your comments and as we improve our editing - there should be a huge improvement.
Hey team.... You used all the things we have learned this term in your writing sample. I saw heaps of adjectives and mountains of similes. I would love to see you use 'Writer's Eyes' to edit your very short stories then get some examples on this writing blog.
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