Sunday, 26 May 2013

How to play Mine craft - Joshua

Mine craft is a game I love to play. The controls are w for forwards, s for backwards, d for for left and a for right.
Mine craft can be educational but it's still fun.
I don't play the educational version but I play the normal one because it's so fun.

I'll tell a story about MINE CRAFT.
I was in my home when I saw a figure outside my home. I looked out of my window. It was an Enderman. An Enderman is a tall big black monster that teleports and when you kill it, the creature gives you an Ender pill.
I tried not to look in its eyes but it was to late.

I had to fight it. Yay- I won. It was hard but I won. Then I went for a walk. I found a mine and in it was obsidian. This is a magical Rick that you can build and make a teleport with it. In real life it is a shiny black glass made in volcanoes when lava cools very quickly. On Mine craft you need to find a pool of lava and pour water on it and it makes obsidian. You need a diamond pick to mine it.

I made a Portal to the Nether. I made a home in the Nether that looks cool. I said to my self "It really looks cool." I began to live there.
The Nether is terrible. There are Gast killing you and shooting fire at you. Gast are made out of a bock like all of the mine craft world is.

I love playing mine craft because it is all I have to do at home and it's addictive. It helps me learn how to write so I can talk to other players.









6 comments:

  1. Josh,
    this is not the work of a boy who does not like writing. It is the work of a Minecraft expert who is handy on an iPad. I love the way you sounded out all your words and were happy to change and improve things.
    To make this even better there are two small mistakes to fix:

    Bock should be block
    Rick should be rock

    Stunning work. What will you teach us about next?

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  2. Josh,
    I was so pleased to see you writing on something that you know lots about. In my Year 2 and 3 class we are about to start a unit on writing non-fiction and reading your work made me realise how cool this could be.
    You are an expert and can teach other people about minecraft. I wonder if you have more to teach on this subject. What other chapters would you need to add?
    Keep up the good work.
    Ms Donnell

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    1. Thanks fore the great comment ill write one more mine craft story. I will put photos in this time of a roller-coaster.
      From Josh.

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  3. Hi Josh,
    That is a really good piece of writing. Do you like writing about things you like? Keep up the awesome work, I would like to read more things like that on the blog.
    Lucy

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  4. Hi Josh

    Thank you for teaching me about the Enderman, and Obsidian.

    I think you have LOTS of interesting Minecraft stories to tell. You could even write a story, and then re-create it in Minecraft, as if the story was on the stage! You would need a script.

    Now, there's a challenge ;-)

    Carol

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  5. My goodness Josh what a great effort this is - I am so impressed with your writing here about something that you really enjoy. Well done. Looking forward to the next posting.

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