Monday, 17 June 2013

100 word challenge


You’ll never believe it!
One day Moby and Tim were walking through the forest. The lush leaves lapped at their legs and they were anxious about finding their treasure again. 

Suddenly five multi-coloured parrots swooped down almost hitting their heads! Tim and Moby jumped with shock. They heard the low rumble and grumble of a lion which made a shiver shoot down their spines. 

With scratches on their arms and the leaves lashing their legs and faces, bravely they took a couple more steps towards a clearing.

“ Wow, ” they both whispered in amazement with their jaws dropped.  “That’s amazing.”

By Lucy.


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