Wednesday, 26 June 2013

100 Word Challenge

Tim and Moby
Tim and Moby the robot walked through the forest. They discovered luscious grass that was as green as green and leaves blowing in the wind and the blossoms tickled their noses.  

Suddenly a whole lot of multicolored parrots swooped down, squawking noisily like mad over top of Tim and Moby’s head. Tim couldn’t find the map so they asked the monkey for directions.  The only answer he got was a monkey sound. They pushed through all the terrific tree tops then suddenly they found what they were looking that was big.....

By Liam & Josh & Lachie

1 comment:

  1. Very cool. I thought that the ending was very suspensful. You two are good authors, and i hope to see more of your writing. Did you know that a hundred word story is called a drabble?


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