tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post1657196315839326378..comments2020-04-13T20:21:37.958+12:00Comments on Writing Rocks: Story startAllana Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-845277154856919282013-03-19T20:23:36.331+13:002013-03-19T20:23:36.331+13:00I enjoyed reading this piece of writing - I enjoye...I enjoyed reading this piece of writing - I enjoyed the line 'the gingerbread houses gloom' htat really got me thinking about the picture and set a strong image in my head. The final line also was great I enjoyed thinking about water coming out magically.<br />Mr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato. Melvilleroom8.blogspot.comMelville Intermediate, Hamiltonhttp://melvilleroom8.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com