tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post6036310033360148650..comments2020-04-13T20:21:37.958+12:00Comments on Writing Rocks: 100 word challengeAllana Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-2020356009196013932013-05-13T18:33:12.356+12:002013-05-13T18:33:12.356+12:00Hi Jojo
I like how you don't tell us about eve...Hi Jojo<br />I like how you don't tell us about every single thing you just tell us what is important<br />for your story.<br />I don't think you need to work on anything because it is so good.<br /><br />from chloeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-80453231786150002672013-04-20T01:06:20.875+12:002013-04-20T01:06:20.875+12:00Loooove it! I especially like the part where you g...Loooove it! I especially like the part where you go to the moon. Very exciting! From Selma (QSI Sarajevo, 3rd grade)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-67719964778209718312013-04-20T00:48:29.684+12:002013-04-20T00:48:29.684+12:00My name is Jelena and I think it was fun and if y...My name is Jelena and I think it was fun and if you really want to go to the moon you should get a rocket to go there!!! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-28546618609454297742013-04-20T00:47:10.007+12:002013-04-20T00:47:10.007+12:00Wow sounds like you had a good time. That was a gr...Wow sounds like you had a good time. That was a great story and I liked the deatailAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-90367499336336773352013-04-20T00:46:01.526+12:002013-04-20T00:46:01.526+12:00Sarah
I love your piece of writing. Very creative...Sarah<br /><br />I love your piece of writing. Very creative!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-12456285794729260262013-04-19T01:06:33.364+12:002013-04-19T01:06:33.364+12:00This was a really good piece of writing! It was re...This was a really good piece of writing! It was really imaginative and fun to read. If you want to see my school blog here's a link to it http://classycupcakeblog.weebly.com/Azizahttp://globallearners.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1232974210281704736.post-33348521593933072342013-04-18T22:08:27.479+12:002013-04-18T22:08:27.479+12:00Dear Josephine,
I am Thomas, one of the k...Dear Josephine, <br /> <br /> I am Thomas, one of the kids from QSI International School of Sarajevo. I like how you were so imaginary of the challenge, how the moon melted, and you slid into the gooey middle. I have also done something like that before, although you have to make a story using a specific group of words, not amount. The moon though, because of its G-Forces to Earth, most likely wouldn’t melt. Speaking of school work, I am doing a blog, http://classypotatoblog.weebly.com/ that I would think you would enjoy. One last thing; does the boy look like he fell in mud in the picture? Well, hope to hear back!<br /> <br />Sincerely, <br /> <br />Thomas B.<br />Thomas B (Sarajevo)http://globallearners.weebly.comnoreply@blogger.com